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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan Write at least 150 words.

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan r862n
Dear Editor I am Shweta and i am resident of the Al Nahda Dubai. I want to draw your attention towards the matter about a public park in your area. Yesterday i have heard a news regarding the park that the local council of our area are going to sell the park to a private company and they might build a shopping center in it. This park is very vauable for your local resident as people of all ages go to this park. The little children play every day in this park. this is benefical for older people also as they do walking and yoga in park. So i fell very dishearted when i got to heard this news and most of the local people of our area are also not awear of this. So i would like you to take some action and post this news in your newspaper. Next sunday we are organizing a campang againts this we need your help. If the coucil continous with this plan then we will take legal action aganist them. Thank you in anticipation and waiting to hear from you soon regards Shweta
Dear Editor

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and
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Dubai. I want to draw your attention towards the matter about a public
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park
in your area.

Yesterday
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have heard
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regarding the
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park
that the local council of our area are going to sell the
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park
to a private
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company and
they might build a shopping center in it. This
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park
is
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very
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vauable
for your local resident as
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people
of all ages go to this
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park
. The
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little
children play every day in this
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park
.
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this
is
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benefical
for older
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people
also
as they
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do walking
and yoga in
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park
.
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fell
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dishearted
when
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i
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got
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this news and most of the local
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people
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also
not
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awear
of this.

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So
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would like you to take
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some
action and post this news in your newspaper.
Next
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sunday
we are organizing a
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campang
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this we need your
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help
. If the
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coucil
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continous
with this plan then we will take legal action
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aganist
them.

Thank you in anticipation and waiting to hear from you
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regards

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Shweta

IELTS letter There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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6 paragraphs
190 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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