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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties VRaw
Dear john, Thank you for accepting my request, although you are tensed at your work. I am leaving this city around 6: 00 PM, so please come as soon as possible. I am returning all the trip details, you can contact through these details. I was planned for a holiday to Maldives and the next one week I will be spending time their. I booked tickets in paradise hotel and they only complete responsible for our personal things, you can call me at any time, if you have any doubts regarding our watching pet or any other activities. Coming to my pet, I was named it as snoopy and you too can call by its name. At the roof of my kitchen I had kept pedigree, feed my dog twice a day and pour some milk at the evening time. I forget to say about my household work, please check my mail box everyday which is attached to the main gate because it might be a confidential information ought to be there. Last essential thing that clean the house once in a day. See you soon. Yours lovingly, Charlie
Dear john, Thank you for accepting my request, although you
are tensed
at your work. I am leaving this city around 6: 00 PM,
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so
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please
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come
as
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soon
as possible. I am returning all the trip
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details
, you can contact through these
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details
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was planned
for a holiday
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the Maldives".
to Maldives
and the
next
one week I will be spending time their.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
booked tickets in paradise
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
hotel and
they
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only
complete responsible for our personal things, you can call me at any time, if you have any doubts regarding our watching pet or any other activities. Coming to my pet, I was
Did you mean simply "named it snoopy"? You do not need the word 'as' here.
named it as snoopy
and you too can call by its name. At the roof of my kitchen I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
pedigree, feed my dog twice a day and pour
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
milk at the evening time. I forget to say about my household work,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
my mail box
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
which
is attached
to the main gate
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because
it might be
'information' is a mass noun (i.e., uncountable). Therefore, the preceding 'a' is probably wrong.
a confidential information
ought to be there. Last essential thing that clean the
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house
once in a day.
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See
you
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soon
. Yours
lovingly
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Charlie
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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