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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet. Describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet. Describe other household duties N58j
Dear John, Thank you so much for honoring my request to take care of my place while I am away. I really appreciate your kind gesture. I am writing to brief you about the main chores you will have to do in my absence. As you probably already know, I keep an aquarium at home. So your most important task is to take care of my fish. They mean a lot to me! Basically, all that you need to do is to feed them and clean their water filter. As for the food, just fill up the feeder every other day. It is located at the top right of the aquarium; you can’t miss it! As for the filter, you need to clean it once every 3 days. Other than that, there isn’t much to do. It would be great if you could keep the place clean. There are two trash bins in the kitchen. Put the leftover food and other waste in the blue bin and recyclable items in the green one. The garbage man will come and collect them every day. If you have any other questions, please don’t hesitate to contact. I will be available via email or phone. Many thanks, Rahul
Dear John,

Thank you
so
much for honoring my request to take care of my place while I am away. I
really
appreciate your kind gesture.

I am writing to brief you about the main chores you will
have to
do in my absence. As you
probably
already know, I
keep
an aquarium at home.
So
your most
important
task is to take care of my fish. They mean a lot to me!
Basically
, all that you need to do is to feed them and clean their water filter. As for the food,
just
fill up the feeder every other day. It
is located
at the top right of the aquarium; you can’t miss it! As for the filter, you need to clean it once every 3 days.

Other than that, there isn’t much to do. It would be great if you could
keep
the place clean. There are two trash bins in the kitchen. Put the leftover food and other waste in the blue bin and recyclable items in the green one. The garbage
man
will
come
and collect them every day. If you have any other questions,
please
don’t hesitate to contact. I will be available via email or phone.

Many
thanks,

Rahul
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet. Describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
204 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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