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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there MpLQ
Dear Diana, It was so good to hear from you and many congratulations on your new job! I'm thrilled to know that you will be moving to Mumbai and I'd like to suggest you live in the best suburb of the city named Bandra, which also happens to be where I stay. It's perfect for NRIs like yourself and has a very relaxed and informal vibe. Not to forget, the amazing night life that it boasts of! As for transportation, you can easily take the metro to your office as it's the fastest and most convenient way to get there. I'd recommend to purchase a monthly metro pass for your daily commute. You can sign up for the membership of the country club of which I'm already a member. I think it's one of the best places to get to meet new people and make some friends. I'd gladly introduce you to the membership committee. I can't wait for you to arrive. Your friend, Sheeba
Dear Diana, It was
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congratulations on your new job! I'm thrilled to know that you will be moving to Mumbai and I'd like to suggest you
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in the best suburb of the city named
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NRIs
like yourself and has a
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relaxed and informal vibe. Not to forget, the amazing
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night life
that it boasts of! As for transportation, you can
easily
take the metro to your office as it's the fastest and most convenient way to
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there. I'd recommend to
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purchase
a monthly metro pass for your daily commute. You can
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sign
up for the membership of the country club of which I'm already a member. I
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think
it's one of the best places to
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friends. I'd
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introduce you to the membership committee.
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can't wait for you to arrive. Your friend,
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Sheeba
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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