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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam I am Sam Chan, a 33 years old guy whom is the one you take care a month ago in the hospital. I am writing to appreciate your taking care. At I remember, my wife and I lost of direction after I had involved in the accident, as my wife has to look after my 1 year old son. She would not be able come to the hospital all the time. Fortunately, you were just over there and felt we lost track. Your kindness querying helped us carm down. To express our appreciation, we would like to invite you for a dinner in my home. We are hopping you have time to come. Please let me know which time is more suitable for you. In addition, if you have any special diet, please let me know and I will arrange for it. Once again, we admire your helping. I look forward hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Sam Chan
Dear Sir or Madam

I am Sam Chan, a 33 years
old
guy whom is the one you take care a month ago in the hospital. I am writing to appreciate your taking care.

At I remember, my wife and I lost of direction after I had involved in the accident, as my wife
has to
look after my 1 year
old
son. She would not be able
come
to the hospital all the time.
Fortunately
, you were
just
over there and felt we lost
track
. Your kindness querying
helped
us
carm
down.

To express our appreciation, we would like to invite you for a dinner in my home. We are hopping you have time to
come
.
Please
let
me know which time is more suitable for you.
In addition
, if you have any special diet,
please
let
me
know and
I will arrange for it.

Once again, we admire your helping. I look forward hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully


Sam Chan
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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