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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there 2eqo
Dear John, I cannot explain in words how excited I am to have you in my city. I know for sure that you will have amazing time living in Ahmedabad. Since you are arriving in winter, I would recommend you stay in the old city area of Ahmedabad. Even though it is quite crowded during day time, the night life here is very vibrant. From food to daily consumables, everything is available close-by. Plus the street food here is to die for! As you wouldn’t have access to your car here, I suggest you take help of excellent public transport in Ahmedabad. The buses here are punctual and the routes are wide enough to cover every area of the city. Hence you won’t find any problem to commute to work. Moreover it is a heaven for socially active people. You would find many festivals and concerts going on here where you would be able to interact with new people, probably as same personality as yours. Looking forward to see you soon, Lots of love, Alifiya
Dear John,

I cannot
explain
in words how excited I am to have you in my city. I know for sure that you will have amazing time living in Ahmedabad.

Since you are arriving in winter, I would recommend you stay in the
old
city area of Ahmedabad.
Even though
it is quite crowded during day time, the
night life
here is
very
vibrant. From food to daily consumables, everything is available close-by. Plus the street food here is to
die
for!

As you wouldn’t have access to your car here, I suggest you take
help
of excellent public transport in Ahmedabad. The buses here are punctual and the routes are wide
enough
to cover every area of the city.
Hence
you won’t find any problem to commute to work.

Moreover
it is a heaven for
socially
active
people
. You would find
many
festivals and concerts going on here where you would be able to interact with new
people
,
probably
as same personality as yours.

Looking forward to
see
you
soon
,

Lots of
love
,

Alifiya
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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  American English
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174 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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