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A company plans to build a shopping complex near your home.

A company plans to build a shopping complex near your home. kLn2K
I am writing this letter to express my personal opinion about the construction of a shopping centre at Navoi street in which I reside. It was really surprising for me when I read the news in the newspaper "Narodnoe slova" which highlighted that Murad Nazar has plans to demolish the Parking area and replace it with a new shopping complex. There are no big shopping facilities in our locality, and so we have to reach the town to do shopping. The plan is really beneficial for us as we can save our time and money. As a curious inhabitant I would like to know that when the shopping mall will be built up. In addition, will there be electronics gadgets or will the mall has a supermarket centring on daily needs. And if you do not mind, I would suggest an underground parking facility instead of the old one. Thank you for hearing me out. Yours faithfully. Feruza
I am writing this letter to express my personal opinion about the construction of a
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shopping
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centre
at
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Navoi
street in which I reside.

It was
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really surprising
for me when I read the news in the newspaper
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Narodnoe
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slova
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which highlighted that
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Murad
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Nazar
has plans to demolish the Parking area and replace it with a new
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shopping
complex. There are no
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big
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shopping
facilities in our locality, and
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so
we
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have to
reach the town to do
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shopping
. The plan is
really
beneficial for us as we can save our time and money.

As a curious inhabitant I would like to know that when the
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shopping
mall will
be built
up.
In addition
, will there be electronics gadgets or will the mall has a supermarket
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centring
on daily needs. And if you do not mind, I would suggest an underground parking facility
instead
of the
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old
one.

Thank you for hearing me out.

Yours
faithfully
.

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Feruza

IELTS letter A company plans to build a shopping complex near your home.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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