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Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you were unable to attend. write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: *State why you could not go *Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner. * Suggest another time to meet.

Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you were unable to attend. write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: *State why you could not go *Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner. * Suggest another time to meet. ykNP
Dear Sohail, I hope you are in the good health. I reckon that your 28th birthday party was rocking and full of joy. I want to make a sincere apology for not being at the party. I’m sure you might be wondering the reason for my absence from the night. The evening when I was about to leave for your place, my mother was not feeling well because of stomach disorder. Considering the situation, I immediately rushed to the hospital. Thankfully, she was diagnosed and was later hospitalised to check for any stomach related issues if any. Since my father was overseas for a business trip and I had to be with my mother for two days. I understand that you might be annoyed with me because I couldn’t informed you about my absence. To make this up, I have planned a badminton game followed by a lunch and a long drive during this weekend. I will pick you up from your place at 10 in the morning and I’m really excited to hear everything about the celebration. Your Friend, Aqeel
Dear
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Sohail
,

I hope you are in the
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good
health. I reckon that your 28th birthday party was rocking and full of joy.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a sincere apology for not being at the party.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m sure you might be wondering the reason for my absence from the night. The evening when I was about to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for your place, my mother was not feeling well
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of stomach disorder.

Considering the situation, I immediately rushed to the hospital.
Thankfully
, she
was diagnosed
and was later
Possible spelling mistake. 'hospitalised' is British English.
hospitalised
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
for any stomach related issues if any. Since my father was overseas for a business trip and I had to be with my mother for two days.

I understand that you might
be annoyed
with me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I couldn’t
The verb 'couldn't' requires base form of this verb: "inform"
informed
you about my absence. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this up, I have planned a badminton game followed by a lunch and a long drive during this weekend. I will pick you up from your place at 10 in the morning and I’m
really
excited to hear everything about the celebration.

Your Friend,
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Aqeel

IELTS letter Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you were unable to attend. write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: *State why you could not go *Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner. * Suggest another time to meet.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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