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You work for an international company and would like to spend six monthsain working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to you manager.

You work for an international company and would like to spend six monthsain working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to you manager. Vml3
Dear Mr. Ryan, I am writing this letter to seek six months extension at our company headquarters in the USA. In order to further enhance my skills so that I can better contribute to my company and can carry out responsibilities more efficiently. As you are aware we have started developing the App for our client McDonald’s at our offshore development center in California. McDonald’s is a giant client that has branches in more than 120 countries of the world. So, in order to make the App user-friendly with an attractive user-interface. I need to get in touch with the client once in every 15 days so that we are at the same pace. During my absence, I would like my colleague Mr. Tomson to take over my responsibilities however I will be checking my emails on daily basis, and in case of any assistance, he can call me anytime. Finally, I would need your support to get the approvals for the travel plan which I feel that will really help us to get the product development with a 100% success rate in one go. I look forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Jacob Creek
Dear Mr. Ryan,

I am writing this letter to seek six months extension at our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
headquarters in the USA. In order to
further
enhance my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can better contribute to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and can carry out responsibilities more
efficiently
.

As you are aware we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
developing the App for our client McDonald’s at our offshore development center in California. McDonald’s is a giant client that has branches in more than 120 countries of the world.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the App user-friendly with an attractive user-interface. I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in touch with the client once in every 15 days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we are at the same pace.

During my absence, I would like my colleague Mr.
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Tomson
to take over my responsibilities
however
I will be checking my emails on daily basis, and in case of any assistance, he can call me anytime.

Finally
, I would need your support to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the approvals for the travel plan which I feel that will
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the product development with a 100% success rate in one go.

I look forward to your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jacob Creek
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IELTS letter You work for an international company and would like to spend six monthsain working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to you manager.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
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