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Youth of this generation are richer but not happy.

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The youths of this generation are safer and richer but end up being not happy. Some parents make their children grow by a silver spoon. They never have faced any kind of struggle in life. For example, if someone gifts any handmade item, they would never realise the value of it. While rest of the parents teach good values while growing up so that they have a bright future. From a young age they are ready to face any kind of hurdle. In conclusion, even if youths are richer but end up being not happy as they do not get parental love.
The youths of this generation are safer and richer
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up being not happy.

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parents
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their children grow by a silver spoon. They never have faced any kind of struggle in life.
For example
, if someone gifts any handmade item, they would never
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realise
the value of it.

While rest of the parents teach
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good
values while growing up
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that they have a bright future. From a young age they are ready to face any kind of hurdle.

In conclusion
, even if youths are richer
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but
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end
up being not happy as they do not
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parental
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IELTS essay Youth of this generation are richer but not happy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
102 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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