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Why is it important to be Vaccinated

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Some people in this world do not understand the important of vaccination itself. They might want to be injected if it is a requirement, however, there is no basic knowledge about the vaccine they are about to get. Vaccine is contained of a live attenuated microorganism. There is no way where a vaccine could work if the researchers did not implied it to animals. Although, there is a regulation that is cruelty free, nevertheless, animal, especially, monkey or rat, they have a similarity with Human's DNA. The researchers will work months to years just to discover the efficacy of vaccine itself, therefore, they require several trials to be done in order for them to announce that the vaccine is working to human. There will be failures in the journey but these do not make researchers gave up on it. They will take some times and have patience to develop it day by day, because if they did not observe carefully, it would have created problems in the future due to lack of attention and perseverance. I believe they are educated beforehand, hence, we should put our faith to them since they have learnt and experienced during their studies. Improving vaccine will be very difficult but the researchers have no choice but look at the market also follow the update yearly because Health industry is always different yearly.
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in this world do not understand the
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important
of vaccination itself. They might want to
be injected
if it is a requirement,
however
, there is no basic knowledge about the
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vaccine
they are about to
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Vaccine
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live
attenuated microorganism. There is no way where a
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vaccine
could work if the
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did not
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it to animals. Although, there is a regulation
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cruelty free
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, animal,
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researchers
will work months to years
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to discover the efficacy of
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itself,
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in order for them to announce that the
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vaccine
is working to human. There will be failures in the journey
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times and have patience to develop it day by day,
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if they did not observe
carefully
, it would have created problems in the future due to lack of attention and perseverance. I believe they
are educated
beforehand,
hence
, we should put our faith to them since they have
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and experienced during their studies. Improving
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vaccine
will be
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difficult
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IELTS essay Why is it important to be Vaccinated

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
227 words
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