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Effect of technology on environment

Effect of technology on environment BMVlm
Technology has become a person navodaya technologies one of the greatest and that the world is facing it has a lot effect on technology like deforestation air pollution caused by technologies on technology fact with depression because the loss of trees they can change climate change reading increase greenhouse gas in the atmosphere as well as soldiers with the technology they were there and with that humans and animals
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one of the greatest and that the world is facing it has
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technology
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technologies
on
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technology
fact with depression
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because
the loss of trees they can
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climate
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reading increase greenhouse gas in the atmosphere
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they were there and with that humans and animals
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IELTS essay Effect of technology on environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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