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your unforgettable holiday trip.

your unforgettable holiday trip. N3DV2
1. Write a 100-word passage about your unforgettable holiday trip. I have had many trips, but the trip to Cua Lo beach in the summer of 9th grade with my family is the most unforgettable trip. We traveled by car for about 5 hours, but I was not only not tired but also very excited because this was my first time going to the sea. Cua Lo beach is interesting. The wave is very strong, I enjoyed playing with it. We stayed at Thanh Nam hotel. It was very nice and comfortable, from where we could walk to the sea. Hot weather all day. The sea is very cool and clear, because the afternoon is windy. I took a lot of pictures of the sea and bought a lot of seafood. I felt happy and refreshed after that trip. I hope to go there again!
1. Write a 100-word passage about your unforgettable holiday
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Cua
Lo beach in the summer of 9th grade with my family is the most unforgettable
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trip
. We traveled by car for about 5 hours,
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I was not
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not tired
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very
excited
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Cua
Lo beach is interesting. The wave is
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strong, I enjoyed playing with it. We stayed at Thanh Nam hotel. It was
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very
nice and comfortable, from where we could walk to the
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sea
. Hot weather all day. The
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sea
is
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very
cool and
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clear
,
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because
the afternoon is windy. I took
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a lot of
pictures of the
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sea
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bought
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a lot of
seafood. I felt happy and refreshed after that
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hope to go there again!
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IELTS essay your unforgettable holiday trip.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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