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3) Write about household chores you do and your problems with sharing housework.

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Nowadays, a lot of people don't want to do housework. but, I like doing housework because they bring many benefits. I usually clean my room, sweep the floor, cook, and do the laundry. On weekends, I always help my mother with the garden. I often have some problems in sharing housework. Today's society is more developed, people do not have time to do household chores. So I did a lot of housework to help my parents. It takes up a lot of my time and it makes me feel tired
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benefits. I
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clean my room, sweep the floor, cook, and do the laundry. On weekends, I always
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help
my mother with the garden. I
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have
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problems in sharing
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people
do not have time to do household chores.
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I did
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a lot of
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help
my parents. It takes up
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IELTS essay 3) Write about household chores you do and your problems with sharing housework.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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