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3) Write about household chores you do and your problems with sharing housework.

3) Write about household chores you do and your problems with sharing housework. nxOxo
Nowadays, a lot of people don't want to do housework. but, I like doing housework because they bring many benefits. I usually clean my room, sweep the floor, cook, and do the laundry. On weekends, I always help my mother with the garden. I often have some problems in sharing housework. Today's society is more developed, people do not have time to do household chores. So I did a lot of housework to help my parents. It takes up a lot of my time and it makes me feel tired
Nowadays,
a lot of
people
don't want to do
housework
.
but
, I like doing
housework
because
they bring
many
benefits. I
usually
clean my room, sweep the floor, cook, and do the laundry. On weekends, I always
help
my mother with the garden. I
often
have
some
problems in sharing
housework
.
Today
's society is more developed,
people
do not have time to do household chores.
So
I did
a lot of
housework
to
help
my parents. It takes up
a lot of
my time and it
makes
me feel
tired
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IELTS essay 3) Write about household chores you do and your problems with sharing housework.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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