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Your opinion on current situation of Nandigram

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It is been almost a decade of surviving of Nandigram and Singur people. After 35 years governing by the Marxist and 10 years ruling by the TMC their situation still remains the same. People still live in mud houses, without electricity, without a proper sanitary facilities. If anything that change is only the arrival of political parties otherwise the struggle and poverty is constant. Every five year the elections are held, political leaders promote their parties and claim that they want to help them, want to solve their problems but is it really true? NO! not at all because they never ever think about the common people. Those so called leaders only think about their own profit, their own publicity. First of all if you really want to help them then you do not need to be a political figure, but in case if you are then you can use your position for a better work. Among this years there is not, a proper higher secondary schools, people facing unemployment and suffering from poverty. Few years ago few leaders using this problems to amplifying their political agenda. In reality only hardly any problems get solved but others are still visible. I am not supporting any political party but I am blaming those political leaders who make a fool of common people. They using their helplessness to gaining vote. The native people felt thugged after all this time. Because on every election season, new faces came and pretend to listen them but there is not a single one who comes with a solution. I never understand their shamless mentality, every 5 year those people returned with their “fake helping assurance” but after election they literally forgot about those poor individuals. We all are a part of “human-chase”, leaders are just using us to filling their pockets, they always pretend that they are our well-wisher but in reality they never be our ally.
It
is been
almost a decade of surviving of
Nandigram
and
Singur
people
. After 35 years governing by the Marxist and 10 years ruling by the TMC their situation
still
remains the same.
People
still
live
in mud
houses
, without electricity, without a proper sanitary
facilities
. If anything that
change
is
only
the arrival of political parties
otherwise
the struggle and poverty is constant. Every five
year
the elections
are held
, political
leaders
promote their parties and claim that they want to
help
them, want to solve their problems
but
is it
really
true? NO!
not
at all
because
they never ever
think
about the common
people
. Those
so called
leaders
only
think
about their
own
profit, their
own
publicity.
First of all
if you
really
want to
help
them then you do not need to be a political figure,
but
in case if you are then you can
use
your position for a better work. Among
this years
there is not, a proper higher secondary schools,
people
facing unemployment and suffering from poverty. Few years ago few
leaders
using
this
problems to amplifying their political agenda. In reality
only
hardly any problems
get
solved
but
others are
still
visible. I am not supporting any political party
but
I am blaming those political
leaders
who
make
a fool of common
people
.
They using
their helplessness to gaining vote. The native
people
felt
thugged
after all
this time.
Because
on every election season, new faces came and pretend to listen them
but
there is not a single one who
comes
with a solution.

I never understand their
shamless
mentality, every 5
year
those
people
returned with their “fake helping assurance”
but
after election they
literally
forgot about those poor individuals. We all are a part of “human-chase”,
leaders
are
just
using us to filling their pockets, they always pretend that they are our well-wisher
but
in reality they
never be
our ally.
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IELTS essay Your opinion on current situation of Nandigram

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