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Some companies have uniform for their staff. Define advantage and benefits

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Nowadays, every individual have their own uniform according to the company in which they work. This essay will discuss what are the pros of having a uniform and the benefits to the staff and also to the company for having a uniform. There are various advantages for a company to having a uniform for their employees. firstly, all the staff have the same personality and look like each other due to which they live in a unity. for example, in a company, if no uniform is given to the staff then they wear formal clothes due to which poor people not have enough clothes to worn and then the rich staff might create a difference between them and poor mankind. In addition, the company will not grow successfully. Secondly, if a company have its specific uniform for their workers then they represent their company and everyones knowns that they are a part of that company. However, with the advantages, there are also many benefits because companies like google and tesla have famous in all our the world and their staff are recognise by their uniform due to which they have a fame in the society as well as in country. Furthermore, the staff who belongs to famous company will earn more and more. For instance, my friend work in a famous company named TATA motors and she get high amount of salary as well as they provide her many facilities because in their company a gym is situated and they gave them food and clothes free of cost. Therefore, having a uniform for the staff have many benefits. In conclusion, every company have their specific uniform for their staff which they wear during work and it has many advantages like they have a specific logo for their company and a uniform put staff in a unity. Along with this there are many benefits also such as, from uniform they get fame in the society if they belong to a famous company and employer is also provide them many facilities with good income.
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in which they work. This essay will discuss what are the pros of
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and the benefits to the
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There are various advantages for a
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for their employees.
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firstly
, all the
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staff
have the same personality and look like each other due to which they
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live
in a unity.
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for
example, in a
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company
, if no
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uniform
is
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given
to the
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staff
then they wear formal clothes due to which poor
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people
not have
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enough
clothes to worn and then the rich
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staff
might create a difference between them and poor mankind.
In addition
, the
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company
will not grow
successfully
.
Secondly
, if a
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have its specific
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uniform
for their workers then they represent their
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and
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knowns
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many
benefits
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companies
like google and tesla have
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famous
in all our the world and their
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are
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by their
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due to which they have a fame in the society
as well
as in country.
Furthermore
, the
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staff
who belongs to
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will earn more and more.
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, my friend work in a
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company
named
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TATA motors
and she
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high amount of salary
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many
facilities
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in their
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a gym is
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situated and
they gave them food and clothes free of cost.
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In conclusion
, every
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have their specific
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for their
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staff
which they wear during work and it has
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many
advantages like they have a specific logo for their
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company
and a
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put
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staff
in a unity. Along with this there are
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many
benefits
also
such as, from
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they
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get
fame in the society if they belong to a
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company
and employer is
also
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provide
them
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many
facilities with
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good
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IELTS essay Some companies have uniform for their staff. Define advantage and benefits

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
342 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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