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your mother - the one you love most of all

your mother - the one you love most of all xxRxQ
An important person who has influenced my life in the most positive way is my mother. Nothing in the world can compare with the true love and the care of my mother. She is not only my mother but also my friend and my great teacher. She taught me how to be brave, honest and kind to everyone. She also showed me how to give and take. Although she is very busy, she always spares her time for her family. She is always the first one to get up and prepare breakfast for us. She is the first person who has come to my mind whenever I have to cope with difficulties. In conclusion, in my heart, my mom is the most perfect woman in the world.
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person who has influenced my life in the most
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positive
way is my mother. Nothing in the world can compare with the true
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love
and the care of my mother. She is not
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my mother
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also
my friend and my great teacher. She taught me how to be brave, honest and kind to everyone.
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She
also
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showed
me how to give and take. Although she is
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very
busy, she always spares her time for her family. She is always the
first
one to
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get
up and prepare breakfast for us. She is the
first
person who has
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come
to my mind whenever I
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have to
cope with difficulties.
In conclusion
, in my heart, my mom is the most perfect woman in the world.

IELTS essay your mother - the one you love most of all

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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