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your mother - the one you love most of all

your mother - the one you love most of all xxRxQ

An important person who has influenced my life in the most positive way is my mother. Nothing in the world can compare with the true love and the care of my mother. She is not only my mother but also my friend and my great teacher. She taught me how to be brave, honest and kind to everyone. She also showed me how to give and take. Although she is very busy, she always spares her time for her family. She is always the first one to get up and prepare breakfast for us. She is the first person who has come to my mind whenever I have to cope with difficulties. In conclusion, in my heart, my mom is the most perfect woman in the world.

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 my friend and my great teacher. She taught me how to be brave, honest and kind to everyone. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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, in my heart, my mom is the most perfect woman in the world. 