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School Education System In Vietnam

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Education is seen as a national priority in Vietnam. Although the education system in Vietnam has its shortcomings, the government has made a commitment to improve the education system overall with budget increases and constant development. The primary school completion rate is high in Vietnam in addition to low student-teacher ratios. The government also introduced the “Fundamental School Quality Level Standards” to provide universal access to education and ensure that minimal conditions were met in every primary school.
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as a national priority in Vietnam. Although the
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education
system in Vietnam has its shortcomings, the
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government
has made a commitment to
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improve
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education
system
overall
with budget increases and constant development. The primary school completion rate is high in Vietnam
in addition
to low student-teacher ratios. The
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government
also
introduced the “Fundamental School Quality Level Standards” to provide universal access to
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education
and ensure that minimal conditions
were met
in every primary school.
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IELTS essay School Education System In Vietnam

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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