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your homeland and your house

your homeland and your house gx7L1

my town is beside the coast of the Ha Tinh countryside. plenty sunlight and windy place, where have generous and honest people. Homeland of great poet Nguyen Du along with the legend of 99 Hong mountains. all of the place in my homeland is beautiful but the most you should try dawn at the beach. the ship with plenty of fish return, cool wind in the morning, the taste of the sea, watch the sunrise little by little until taking off the pink shirt colorful. my house was made in 1963 a house in the style of the period. it has 4 parts, 1 the living room, 1 kitchen and 2 bedrooms, behind we have wells. it's covering turquoise color and red roof, my house is besides a huge rice field, time immemorial we fly a kite, wander over there, catch fish crab in the canal, raise buffalo with fellows and chase each other. it's a memory I keep in my heart

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plenty
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 in 1963 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
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