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My name is Thu Hien. I am a high school student. So most of my day is spent studying. My daily work is also quite simple

My name is Thu Hien. I am a high school student. So most of my day is spent studying. My daily work is also quite simple gx7J1
My name is Thu Hien. I am a high school student. So most of my day is spent studying. My daily work is also quite simple. Currently, due to the complicated situation of the Covid-19 epidemic, we have to distance learning. Consequently, the amount of daily homework has increased significantly. I regularly spend 30 minutes a day in order to do exercise and have breakfast. Immediately after, I do homework, normally natural subjects: math, chemistry for a whole time. Morning is the optimal time so as to study since your brain will function optimally. Apart from that, I have a craving for learning something brand new this summer. Right after looking for it, I discovered playing the guitar really hit the pot! It takes me 2 hours a day to study. The rest of the time I read books and give my mom a hand at housework
My name is Thu
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Hien
. I am a high school student.
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So
most of my day
is spent
studying. My daily work is
also
quite simple.
Currently
, due to the complicated situation of the Covid-19 epidemic, we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
distance learning.
Consequently
, the amount of daily homework has increased
significantly
. I
regularly
spend 30 minutes a day in order to do exercise and have breakfast. Immediately after, I do homework,
normally
natural subjects: math, chemistry for a whole time. Morning is the optimal time
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so as to
study since your brain will function
optimally
. Apart from that, I have a craving for learning something brand new this summer. Right after looking for it, I discovered playing the guitar
really
hit the pot! It takes me 2 hours a day to study. The rest of the time I read books and give my mom a hand at
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housework
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IELTS essay My name is Thu Hien. I am a high school student. So most of my day is spent studying. My daily work is also quite simple

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  American English
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