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To Nung Restaurant is located on Ton Duc Thang street, in Pleiku city, Gia Lai province. It is located on the opposite side of Lake Pleiku, the largest lake here. The restaurant is surrounded by a very cool and poetic green pine forest. When I was there, I ate special dishes such as: grilled chicken, lam rice, fried crickets and drank some can wine. The food here is very well prepared and reasonably priced. The staff here are also all Jrai ethnic people. They are quite agile and extremely friendly. The restaurant is divided into different separate rooms. While eating, we can call jrai people to sing, play the lute, play the guitar or beat the drums. From the scenery, the space, the food to the service, all are imbued with the culture of the people. here. I really enjoyed the food and the view here. If given a chance, I will definitely come back to this particular restaurant.
To
Nung
Restaurant
is located
on Ton
Duc
Thang
street, in
Pleiku
city,
Gia
Lai
province. It
is located
on the opposite side of Lake
Pleiku
, the largest lake here. The
restaurant
is surrounded
by a
very
cool and poetic green pine forest. When I was there, I ate special dishes such as: grilled chicken, lam rice, fried crickets and drank
some
can wine. The food here is
very
well prepared
and
reasonably
priced. The staff here are
also
all
Jrai
ethnic
people
. They are quite agile and
extremely
friendly. The
restaurant
is divided
into
different
separate rooms. While eating, we can call
jrai
people
to sing, play the lute, play the guitar or beat the drums. From the scenery, the space, the food to the service, all
are imbued
with the culture of the
people
.
here
. I
really
enjoyed the food and the view here. If
given
a chance, I will definitely
come
back to this particular
restaurant
.
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