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Your favourite means of transport.

Your favourite means of transport. ne60R

Describe your bicycle. My favorite means of transport is bicycle. First, it is beneficial to my health. I'm very busy in doing working and lack physical exercise. Riding a bicycle provides me with such an opportunity. Besices, it's quite convenient. In my city, there are many traffic jams. However, riding a bike is different because you will never be bothered by the rush hour. Third, it makes me throughly enjoy the natural life. I can take a breathe of fresh air freely, riding in the sunshine under the blue sky and white clound. I feel very content. Another reason is that it helps to protect our environment. It does not produce pollution. This is very important in big cities. I ofter ride my bicycle to department stores of supermarkets. On weekends, I go to the countryside withmy family by bicycle. We ride for about one hour before we arrive at our destination, and then we begin to enjoy our life.

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Describe
 your bicycle.

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