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Your English teacher has asked you to write a composition about a difficult decision you or someone you know has had to make, the issues which had to be considered and whether you now think the right choice was made. Write between 250 and 300 words.

Your English teacher has asked you to write a composition about a difficult decision you or someone you know has had to make, the issues which had to be considered and whether you now think the right choice was made. Write between 250 and 300 words. XVlpw
How to spend your savings is one of the crucial issues that everyone has to face in their life sooner or later. This is the case of my sister who, excited by her first earnings, was intended to spend all her saved money on an upscale holiday in the USA. As she told me about her plans, I immediately thought that it was a terrible idea and not well-thought at all. First, spending every single penny of her savings on a super luxurious holiday would not have taken future finance’s issues into account. So, I suggested her being attentive and careful about the bits and pieces of differences between accommodations and travel agencies. At first, my sister rebuffed me saying that I had a super pessimistic view of the world, but I remembered her that money doesn’t grow on trees and to give it another shot. Moreover, if she had thrown money down the drain, future small holidays together would have been out of sight for a while. I knew that she desired to have a decent life after all, so I persuaded her that she could afford to have no money for the never coming rainy days. Despite she is as stubborn as a mule, I know her for ages and I knew that she would have made her decisions really carefully. Thus, unsurprisingly, she abandoned her irrational plans and invited me to spend four days together visiting Amsterdam. It was a memorable holiday, we had a great time together despite we didn’t accommodate in a five-stars deluxe hotel! She convinced herself to have made the right decision: luxury is not about how much money someone spends, but how someone is satisfied.
How to
spend
your savings is one of the crucial issues that everyone
has to
face in their life sooner or later. This is the case of my sister who, excited by her
first
earnings,
was intended
to
spend
all her saved
money
on an upscale
holiday
in the USA.

As she
told
me about her plans, I immediately
thought
that it was a terrible
idea
and not well-
thought
at all.
First
, spending every single penny of her savings on a super luxurious
holiday
would not have taken future finance’s issues into account.
So
, I suggested her being attentive and careful about the bits and pieces of differences between accommodations and travel agencies. At
first
, my sister rebuffed me saying that I had a super pessimistic view of the world,
but
I remembered her that
money
doesn’t grow on trees and to give it another shot.
Moreover
, if she had thrown
money
down the drain, future
small
holidays
together would have been out of sight for a while. I knew that she desired to have a decent life
after all
,
so
I persuaded her that she could afford to have no
money
for the never coming rainy days. Despite she is as stubborn as a mule, I know her for ages and I knew that she would have made her decisions
really
carefully
.
Thus
,
unsurprisingly
, she abandoned her irrational plans and invited me to
spend
four days together visiting Amsterdam. It was a memorable
holiday
, we had a great time together despite we didn’t accommodate in a five-stars deluxe hotel! She convinced herself to have made the right decision: luxury is not about how much
money
someone
spends
,
but
how someone
is satisfied
.
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IELTS essay Your English teacher has asked you to write a composition about a difficult decision you or someone you know has had to make, the issues which had to be considered and whether you now think the right choice was made. Write between 250 and 300 words.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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