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your action into environment

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The environment gives us countless benefits that we can’t repay our entire life. However, instead of people finding ways to protect and develop the environment, either directly or indirectly, modern society's activities severely damage and impact the environment. I, too, have committed an environmentally harmful act by using plastic and releasing it into the ecosystem. I've been using plastic products since I was a child, and it become a part of my daily routine. Plastic is frequently used as a raw material to manufacture a wide range of plastic products used in everyday life, including tables, chairs, bottles, raincoats, plastic bags, cups, plates, bowls, and so on. Plastic is used in almost every aspect of my family. Plastic bags, boxes, and bottles are the ones I use the most. Plastic utensils are generally inexpensive, which is ideal for my family ’s income, and it is becoming increasingly popular. As a result, the amount of plastic waste produced every day is enormous. Personally, I am a prime example. I use at least one to two plastic bags per day to store household waste. Not only that, but I also keep them for storing common foods. Although the number of plastic may appear small, I throw away a lot of them every day, and the total amount of plastic waste can be over 40 kilogrammes. Plastic waste, on the other hand, takes a long time to decompose, taking at least 100 years and sometimes thousands of years. Air and water pollution will result from improper handling. Many animals can die as a result of being eaten, putting them at risk of extinction and causing ecological imbalance. In conclusion, I'm aware of how damaging my actions are to the environment, and I'm looking for solutions. I've also cut down on the amount of plastic waste I release into the environment, but it's still not enough. I'm certain that I'll have to try harder to eliminate all plastic items from my life.
The
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environment
gives us countless benefits that we can’t repay our entire life.
However
,
instead
of
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people
finding ways to protect and develop the
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environment
, either
directly
or
indirectly
, modern society's activities
severely
damage and impact the
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environment
. I, too, have committed an
environmentally
harmful act by using
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plastic
and releasing it into the ecosystem.

I've been using
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plastic
products since I was a child, and it
Did you mean "becomes"?
become
a part of my daily routine.
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Plastic
is
frequently
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used
as a raw material to manufacture a wide range of
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plastic
products
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used
in everyday life, including tables, chairs, bottles, raincoats,
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plastic
bags, cups, plates, bowls, and
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so
on.
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Plastic
is
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used
in almost every aspect of my family.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Plastic
bags, boxes, and bottles are the ones I
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use
the most.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Plastic
utensils are
generally
inexpensive, which is ideal for my family ’s income, and it is becoming
increasingly
popular.
As a result
, the amount of
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plastic
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waste
produced every day is enormous.
Personally
, I am a prime example. I
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use
at least one to two
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plastic
bags per day to store household
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waste
. Not
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only
that,
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but
I
also
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keep
them for storing common foods. Although the number of
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plastic
may appear
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small
, I throw away
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a lot of
them every day, and the total amount of
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plastic
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waste
can be over 40
Possible spelling mistake. 'kilogrammes' is British English.
kilogrammes
.
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Plastic
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waste
,
on the other hand
, takes a long time to decompose, taking at least 100 years and
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sometimes
thousands of years. Air and water pollution will result from improper handling.
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Many
animals can
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die
as a result
of
being eaten
, putting them at
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risk
of extinction and causing ecological imbalance.

In conclusion
, I'm aware of how damaging my actions are to the
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environment
, and I'm looking for solutions. I've
also
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cut
down on the amount of
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plastic
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waste
I release into the
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environment
,
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but
it's
still
not
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enough
. I'm certain that I'll
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have to
try harder to eliminate all
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plastic
items from my life.
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IELTS essay your action into environment

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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