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Why are teachers important?

Why are teachers important? Bw6pV
As we all know, teachers play a critical role in our community, especially in education. A teacher who teaches you subjects, tell you what to do, play an important role in upbringing children. Teachers are very important. They teach us, they tell us what is right, what is wrong. The work of teachers in our life is countless. Teachers are part of each person's childhood, help them grow up everyday. They give us knowledge, tell us when we make mistakes, when we have bad behavior. Without teachers, our community will be illiterate, no knowledge and behave worse. The recognition of teachers can't be say by words but enormous. Teacher's work is not easy so we need to respect their work by any way. Not only in Vietnam but every countries in the world are also appreciate teachers, who open a new view for our world. Their job is being respectful and still being on significant part of spreading knowledge to other students
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play a critical role in our community,
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in education. A
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who teaches you subjects,
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. They teach us, they
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tell
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. The work of
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in our life is countless.
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are part of each person's childhood,
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them grow up
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. They give us knowledge,
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us when we
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mistakes, when we have
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behavior. Without
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, our community will be illiterate, no knowledge and behave worse. The recognition of
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teachers
can't be say by words
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enormous. Teacher's work is not easy
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we need to respect their work by any way. Not
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in Vietnam
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, who open a new view for our world. Their job is being respectful and
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being on significant part of spreading knowledge to other
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students
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IELTS essay Why are teachers important?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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