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There are several beneficial sides including parents do not worry about their children's lifestyle and abundance wealth to

There are several beneficial sides including parents do not worry about their children's lifestyle and abundance wealth to MrA1o
In our constantly-changing world, it is highly likely that technology can play an essential role in our life not too distant future. We can use robots for the number of jobs in the future. Although robots can be beneficial for our life, this can be a adverse development due to troubles which are associated to find a job for people. On the one hand, machine can be utilized by communityl in the industrial zone or other points. The main reason is that the technologies are dramatically increasinog today. As a result, these machines will do most tasks in manufacture sites. To illustrate, in Tokyo they will have been using them to produce the project until replace from these robots to modern ones. The other example, if you employ someone, this will be costly for your pocket, namely, it will affect our financial sides. Thus, we can definitely see the robots who are doing the job around us in the future. On the other hand, we cannot be overlooked that there will several problems which are refereed to find a new job for people. The main reason can be that if clever Android has been occupied every place, society cannot find any job themselves. As they have to supply with funding their families, if they do not have any job to work, this situation will cause the other problems in their life. For example, we can use robots if we want, however, we have to care about people's condition. We do this which we are not allowed to machines to replace the citizens' composition. In conclusion, using clever android is increasingly becoming common case st the time. They are utilized in the number of places in the next time. While this can not be a positive development owing to lack of available job for community.
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highly
likely that technology can play an essential role in our life not too distant future. We can
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robots for the number of
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jobs
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adverse development due to troubles which
are associated
to find a
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people
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On the one hand, machine can
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communityl
in the industrial zone or
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points. The main reason is that the technologies are
dramatically
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increasinog
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today
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, these machines will do most tasks in manufacture sites. To illustrate, in Tokyo they will have been using them to produce the project until replace from these robots to modern ones. The
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example, if you employ someone, this will be costly for your pocket,
namely
, it will affect our financial sides.
Thus
, we can definitely
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see
the robots who are doing the
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around us in the future.

On the
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other
hand, we cannot
be overlooked
that there will several problems which
are refereed
to find a new
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job
for
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people
. The main reason can be that if clever Android has
been occupied
every place, society cannot find any
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job
themselves. As they
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have to
supply with funding their families, if they do not have any
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job
to work, this situation will cause the
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other
problems in their life.
For example
, we can
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use
robots if we want,
however
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care about
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people
's condition. We do this which we are not
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allowed
to machines to replace the citizens' composition.

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increasingly
becoming common case st the time. They
are utilized
in the number of places in the
next
time. While this can not be a
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positive
development owing to lack of available
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for community.
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IELTS essay There are several beneficial sides including parents do not worry about their children's lifestyle and abundance wealth to

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  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
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