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Young people enjoy life more than older people do#INDEPENDENT WRITING TASK#

Young people enjoy life more than older people do#INDEPENDENT WRITING TASK# PVnW2

I completely agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. Youth is the age of happiness and one does not have any commitments. Besides, there are lot many advantages that turn in favor of youth to enjoy life to the core. On the other hand, the old aged people have almost reached the end of their lives and their past experiences or their current condition can sometimes prevent them from enjoying life. First of all, young people do not have any family commitments and worries. All that they have to do, is to study and take care of t. . .

I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement that young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 enjoy life more than older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do. Youth is the age of happiness and one does not have any commitments. Besides
, there are lot This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 advantages that turn in favor of youth to enjoy life to the core. On the other hand
, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 aged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have almost reached the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 and their Consider using "experiences".experiences
past experiences
 or their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 condition can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 them from enjoying life.

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First of all
, young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do not have any family commitments and worries. All that they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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