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Summarize the main points in the lecture, referring to the way that they relate to the reading passage.

Summarize the main points in the lecture, referring to the way that they relate to the reading passage. 2bglX
The Professor in the lecture is talking about the influence of breaks in solving a problem. She agrees to the various steps in the problem solving elucidated in the reading. But she says that problem solving could be made much more efficient, if breaks were being included. Several examples quoted by the Professor in her lecture serve as a testimony to justify her words. First of all, the Professor states that breaks help in understanding and analyzing the problem thoroughly. The reading passage states that the identification of a problem, as the first tas. . .
The Professor in the lecture is talking about the influence of breaks in solving a
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. She
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agrees
to the various steps in the
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problem
solving elucidated in the reading.
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But
she says that
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problem
solving could
be made
much more efficient, if breaks were
being included
. Several examples quoted by the Professor in her lecture serve as a testimony to justify her words.

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First of all
, the Professor states that breaks
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help
in understanding and analyzing the
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problem
thoroughly
. The reading passage states that the identification of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
, as the
first
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tas
.
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.
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IELTS essay Summarize the main points in the lecture, referring to the way that they relate to the reading passage.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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