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INTEGRATED TASK: Summarize the points in the lecture stating how they cast doubts on the reading passage topic points.

INTEGRATED TASK: Summarize the points in the lecture stating how they cast doubts on the reading passage topic points. Kwq0w
Groupthinking, according to the lecture, is a term introduced by Emin Janes. It is a new concept. It is being used to solve problems through the means of getting decisions from a variety of people. The advantage of group thinking are mentioned clearly in the passage. Whereas, the practicalities and the real disadvantages encountered, are presented by the Professor in the lecture, with relevant examples and illustrations. First of all, the Professor in the lecture states that, disastrous decisions are taken during group discussion. People are forced t. . .
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, according to the lecture, is a term introduced by
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Emin
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Janes
. It is a new concept. It is being
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used
to solve problems through the means of getting decisions from a variety of
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people
. The advantage of group thinking
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mentioned
clearly
in the passage. Whereas, the practicalities and the real disadvantages encountered,
are presented
by the Professor in the lecture, with relevant examples and illustrations.

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First of all
, the Professor in the lecture states that, disastrous decisions
are taken
during group discussion.
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People
are forced
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IELTS essay INTEGRATED TASK: Summarize the points in the lecture stating how they cast doubts on the reading passage topic points.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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