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TOEFL WRITING TASK: A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT HUMAN QUALITIES - AGREE/DISAGREE?

TOEFL WRITING TASK: A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT HUMAN QUALITIES - AGREE/DISAGREE? NrnMq
Humor is what makes everyone laugh to their hearts' content. Without humor, our daily life would be bland and boring. To add spice to our lives, we always look forward to those who crack jokes and act in a jovial manner. Such is the importance and relevance of humor in today's world. Hence, I do agree that humor is one of the most important human qualities. First of all, a good sense of humor helps us stay healthy. Recent researches all over the world have found that, people who crack jokes and have good humor are found to relatively have less chances of heart. . .
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Humor
is what
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makes
everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "laughs", "laughed".
laugh
to their hearts' content. Without
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humor
, our daily life would be bland and boring. To
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add
spice to our
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lives
, we always look forward to those who crack jokes and act
Consider replacing "in a jovial manner" with the adverb for "jovial"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a jovial manner
. Such is the importance and relevance of
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humor
in
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today
's world.
Hence
, I do
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agree
that
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humor
is one of the most
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important
human qualities.

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First of all
, a
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good
sense of
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humor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
us stay healthy. Recent researches all over the world have found that,
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people
who crack jokes and have
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good
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humor
are found
to
relatively
have
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun chances is countable.
less
chances of heart.
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.
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IELTS essay TOEFL WRITING TASK: A GOOD SENSE OF HUMOR IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT HUMAN QUALITIES - AGREE/DISAGREE?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
106 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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