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Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they relate to the points made in the reading. Use specific examples and details from both passages in your answer.

Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they relate to the points made in the reading. Use specific examples and details from both passages in your answer. 7aK5Y
Genetically modified foods are getting popularized today. They refer to the plants modified in labs to suit the consumption needs of human beings, employing a variety of molecular biology procedures. The writer concentrates on the advantages of genetically modified foods. On the other hand, the speaker places emphasis on highlighting the disadvantages of genetically modified food substances. First of all, the writer quotes that GM foods have been there for a pretty long time and they help human beings safeguard themselves against cold, drought, salinity, pests and herbicides and h. . .
Genetically
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modified
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foods
are getting popularized
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today
. They refer to the plants
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modified
in labs to suit the consumption needs of human beings, employing a variety of molecular biology procedures. The writer concentrates on the advantages of
genetically
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modified
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foods
.
On the other hand
, the speaker places emphasis on highlighting the disadvantages of
genetically
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modified
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food
substances.

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First of all
, the writer quotes that GM
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foods
have been there for a pretty long
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time and
they
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help
human beings safeguard themselves against
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cold
, drought, salinity, pests and herbicides and h.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
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.

IELTS essay Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they relate to the points made in the reading. Use specific examples and details from both passages in your answer.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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