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Young children should be trained to do house chores. Do you agree or disagree?

Young children should be trained to do house chores. A3yax

Firstly, young children have a lot of free time. They do not need to go to work in the early morning, finish the project until midnight or adapt to work pressure. Not at all, in the school they will not to study too much subject such as Chemistry, Physics, Biology, …They also do not have too much homework or need to prepare for the important examination. For example, in Vietnam children from 9 to 13 have not to look for job or study over 5 hours per day. They will have the whole afternoon after class. Secondly, children should be responsible. In Asian, some parents are quite traditional so they suppose that they grow up their children and the children have to listen what they said. Hence, the children are responsible to learn to do the housework. In conclusion, young children have a lot free time and they need to responsibility to do the house chros.

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