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Happiness is very important in life why it is difficult to define what are the factors to achieve it

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Happiness please a crucial role in individuals life it is key to success of a person it removes the metal surface of the people and make them happy and satisfied in the essay I will intended to analyses the why it is difficult to define happiness and what are the factors that are helpful to achieve the happinessTo start with many people feel it is difficult to tell what is the happiness is it is difficult to define the proper meaning of happiness as some people think it is the only smile that is happiness others believe laughing loudly happiness are the reason that we can't define it is we cannot see it it is just a feeling in my opinion happiness is that removes all or worries and makes us feel happy takes off to the relaxing end shooting mode of life this is the correct definition of happiness for instance when someone watches in using cartoon comedy videos on visit to their favorites for the smile that comes to their face of feeling of satisfaction that they get it happiness moreover there are enormous space that helps to bring marinus in your life no one can deny that a person cannot feel happy until he is alone happiness cannot be infozone the person it is an internal feeling people who live in a joint family test to be more happier than other people who enjoy moment of life openly face all the adversities of life by smiling do not back by others remain away from the negative thoughts remain happy as well as healthy throughout their life for instance people from Soviet Union have Poor health because they always are unsatisfied from life and always remain happy it clearly shows that happiness affects health a person can be happy at various movements like when he realises his goal when he gets the thing that he wants to repeat it can be said that if a person was increased their wingspan of his life live healthy hair should always be happy whatever the circumstances that he should not lose his smile happiness is clearly related with presence of a breathable event so we must try to generate these events
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a crucial role in individuals
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life
it is key to success of a
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person
it removes the metal surface of the
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people
and
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make
them
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happy
and satisfied in the essay I will
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to
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the why
it is difficult to define
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happiness
and what are the factors that are helpful to achieve the
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happinessTo
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many
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people
feel it is difficult to
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tell
what is the
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happiness
is it is difficult to define the proper meaning of
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happiness
as
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people
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think
it is the
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only
smile
that is
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happiness
others believe laughing
loudly
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happiness
are the reason that we can't define it is we cannot
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see
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is
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just
a feeling in my opinion
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happiness
is that removes all or worries and
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makes
us feel
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happy
takes off to the relaxing
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end
shooting mode of
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life
this is the correct definition of
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happiness
for instance
when someone
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watches
in using cartoon comedy videos on visit to their favorites for the smile that
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comes
to their face of feeling of satisfaction that they
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get
it
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happiness
moreover
there are enormous space that
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helps
to bring
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marinus
in your
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life
no one can deny that a
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person
cannot feel
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happy
until he is alone
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happiness
cannot be
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the
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person
it is an internal feeling
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people
who
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live
in a joint family
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test
to be
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than other
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people
who enjoy moment of
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life
openly
face all the adversities of
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life
by smiling do not back by others remain away from the
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negative
thoughts remain
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happy
as well
as healthy throughout their
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people
from Soviet Union have Poor health
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because
they always
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life
and always remain
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it
clearly
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shows
that
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happiness
affects health a
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person
can be
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happy
at various movements like when he
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realises
his goal when he
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gets
the thing that he wants to repeat it can
be said
that if a
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person
was increased
their wingspan of his
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life
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live
healthy hair should always be
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happy
whatever the circumstances that he should not lose his smile
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happiness
is
clearly
related with presence of a breathable
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event
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we
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IELTS essay Happiness is very important in life why it is difficult to define what are the factors to achieve it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
369 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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