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You work in an office area. Your manager is surveying your opinion about eating food at desks. There have been complaints about strong food smells and about leftover food attracting mice. Your manager asked you to complete an opinion survey. Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words. Option A: Everyone should be required to eat only in the kitchen. Option B: Everyone should be free to eat where they want.

In my opinion, every employee should have their meals in the cafeteria only as eating at the desk might litter the workspace which is unhygienic. One should properly wash their hand's pre and post having the meal but people will skip this if they would have the freedom to eat on their desk. Eating also attracts pests such as mice which may also damage the workstation cables which might result in electric shock. Different kinds of food can also leave a foul smell which can stay for longer which can even make sitting in the bay area intolerable. Also, there are many vegans in our office who might not feel comfortable with nonvegetarian food being eaten right next to their bay.
In my opinion, every employee should have their meals in the cafeteria
only
as eating at the desk might litter the workspace which is unhygienic. One should
properly
wash their hand's
pre
and post having the
meal
but
people
will skip this if they would have the freedom to eat on their desk. Eating
also
attracts pests such as mice which may
also
damage the workstation cables which might result in electric shock.

Different
kinds of food can
also
leave
a foul smell which can stay for longer which can even
make
sitting in the
bay area
intolerable.
Also
, there are
many
vegans in our office who might not feel comfortable with
nonvegetarian
food
being eaten
right
next
to their bay.
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IELTS essay You work in an office area. Your manager is surveying your opinion about eating food at desks. There have been complaints about strong food smells and about leftover food attracting mice. Your manager asked you to complete an opinion survey. Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words. Option A: Everyone should be required to eat only in the kitchen. Option B: Everyone should be free to eat where they want.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
121 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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