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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: describe the training course you want to doexplain what the company could do to he v.8

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: describe the training course you want to doexplain what the company could do to he v. 8
Dear sir, I am writing this epistle to you in connection with an online advertisement which invited interested professionals to book their seat for a course called a customer service through the customer’s eyes. I think this course will be very beneficial for me to excel in my current job, therefore I am hoping that you will permit me to participate in it. In relation to the specifics of the program, it will be week-long session and will cover every important aspects of customer management including how to transform them into active advocates for service-oriented companies. Besides this, the program will be conducted by Silk-Route, a reputed human resource management company. The session will commence from 1st July and require prior booking. I am hoping that you would allow me a leave for 7 days to attend the course as they have long-day sessions. Furthermore, I am quite positive that this programme will assist me to learn a new skills and insights on customer management, which I am willing to apply in a company. Eagerly waiting for your positive response. Yours sincerely, Milan Desai.
Dear sir,

I am writing this epistle to you in connection with an online advertisement which invited interested professionals to book their seat for a course called a
customer
service through the
customer’s
eyes. I
think
this course will be
very
beneficial for me to excel in my
current
job,
therefore
I am hoping that you will permit me to participate in it.

In relation to the specifics of the program, it will be week-long session and will cover every
important
aspects of
customer
management including how to transform them into active advocates for service-oriented
companies
.
Besides
this, the program will
be conducted
by Silk-Route, a reputed human resource management
company
.

The session will commence from 1st July and require prior booking. I am hoping that you would
allow
me a
leave
for 7 days to attend the course as they have long-day sessions.
Furthermore
, I am quite
positive
that this
programme
will assist me to learn a new
skills
and insights on
customer
management, which I am willing to apply in a
company
.

Eagerly
waiting for your
positive
response.

Yours
sincerely
,

Milan
Desai
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: describe the training course you want to doexplain what the company could do to he v. 8

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  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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