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You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website.

You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. BwQk5
I did my graduation in Computer Science and Engineering from Oxford University, India and was looking for a diploma course in Machine Learning to enhance my knowledge in this field. While browsing through your college website I find that there are some degree and diploma courses in machine learning but it is not clear which one is good for me. Coming to my interest, I’m highly interested in programming and I’m very good at python and c++ but I was bit confused about choosing the type of programme as there were no information regarding the cost, syllabus and duration of the courses. Also, I’m looking for a scholarship to support my education. There was a link to apply for the scholarship at the bottom side of the website which is redirecting to an empty page. Is scholoarship available for students from India? I kindly request you to help me with opting for the apt programme in Machine Learning and share the relevant information that I asked about the course. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
I did my graduation in Computer Science and Engineering from Oxford University, India and was

looking for a diploma course in Machine Learning to enhance my knowledge in this field. While

browsing through your college website I find that there are
some
degree and diploma courses in

machine learning
but
it is not
clear
which one is
good
for me.

Coming to my interest, I’m
highly
interested in programming and I’m
very
good
at python and

c++
but
I was
bit
confused about choosing the type of
programme
as there were no information

regarding the cost, syllabus and duration of the courses.

Also
, I’m looking for a scholarship to support my education. There was a link to apply for the

scholarship at the bottom side of the website which is redirecting to an empty page. Is
scholoarship


available for students from India?

I kindly request you to
help
me with opting for the apt
programme
in Machine Learning and share the

relevant information that I asked about the course.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS essay You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website.

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