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Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work but the equality of works only .to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work but the equality of works only. gW1pl
it is argued that companies should give more promeness to the afficiency of staff instead of their dresses at workplace. While it sounds me correct up to large extent, I believe dresses at walk matter as well. Manager should focus on employees work quilty give them job. it is beneficial for both boss and staff. because if employees has more work ability they can do more work for company and company can prepare more product and can earn money by selling of items by this industry can fulfill needs of customers. In other words company can make name and fame in society but if good ability of worker for doing work there. As they work hard for getting money so they do work long time to greater the productivity. I believe dressing sense is important at workplace. it is a sense of identity for worker. To elaborate it, if all employees wear same dress they can show you discipline at workplace. Dress show the difference between local people and staff. For example police man wear same dress on duty time it depict difference between them and local masses. Furthermore, dress maintain the equality between all worker if they wear same dress at what time the employees would not worry about what they wear at workplace. To conclude, although the productivity of employees should be the first impority of work, in my view worker should wear appropriate dresses.
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promeness
to the
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instead
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at
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workplace
. While it sounds me correct up to large extent, I believe
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dresses
at walk matter
as well
. Manager should focus on
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employees
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work
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quilty
give them job.
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it
is beneficial for both boss and staff.
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because
if
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employees
has more
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work
ability they can do more
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work
for
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company
and
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company
can prepare more product and can earn money by selling of items by this industry can fulfill needs of customers.
In other words
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company
can
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make
name and fame in society
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but
if
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good
ability of
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for doing
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there. As they
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work
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hard
for getting money
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they do
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work
long time to greater the productivity. I believe dressing sense is
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important
at
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workplace
.
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it
is a sense of identity for
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worker
. To elaborate it, if all
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employees
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wear
same
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dress
they can
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show
you discipline at
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workplace
.
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Dress
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the difference between local
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people
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police
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man
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same
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dress
on duty time it
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difference between them and local masses.
Furthermore
,
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dress
maintain the equality between all
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worker
if they
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wear
same
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dress
at what time the
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employees
would not worry about what they
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wear
at
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workplace
.
To conclude
, although the productivity of
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employees
should be the
first
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impority
of
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work
, in my view
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worker
should
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wear
appropriate
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dresses
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IELTS essay Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work but the equality of works only.

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