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Arising problems when Vietnam obeys rules of origin

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First of all, many Vietnamese enterprises do not fully comprehend the rules of origin. In addition, a number of committed rules of origin are interpreted in a way that makes it difficult for enterprises to comply and take advantage of them. This is why the proportion of export turnover using preferential tariffs under FTAs in total export turnover is currently low and has been trending downward in recent years (from 39 percent in 2018 to 33 percent in 2020). Besides, Vietnamese enterprises are not aware of integration knowledge as well as necessary self-defense measures when participating in FTAs. The percentage of Vietnamese enterprises which can take advantages from FTA is less than 50%. And Vietnam's exports had been the subject of 208 foreign trade remedy investigation cases by the end of August 2021. Majority of Vietnamese businesses are small, medium, and even super small (average registered capital of 6 billion VND per company). However, their products are primarily processed goods that do not add significant economic value. Moreover, Circulars on Rules of Origin under FTAs contain difficult-to-understand language that must always be explained by a Ministry of Industry and Trade official (the only entity in Vietnam with enough expertise to interpret it correctly and effectively force). Especially, Vietnamese garment enterprises are facing many challenges from the rules of origin. In some FTAs such as AFTA, FTA with China, Korea and Chile, the local content requirements are not stringent (raw materials can be imported and only the final stages of cutting and sewing the fabric take place in Vietnam), but for the FTAs such as ASEAN – Australia/New Zealand, ASEAN – India, the local content requirements are much more stringent (final products are required to have a minimum localisation rate of around 35–40%).
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rules
of
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origin
.
In addition
, a number of committed
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of
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origin
are interpreted
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makes
it difficult for
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enterprises
to comply and take advantage of them. This is why the proportion of export turnover using preferential tariffs under
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FTAs
in total export turnover is
currently
low and has been trending downward in recent years (from 39 percent in 2018 to 33 percent in 2020).

Besides
, Vietnamese
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enterprises
are not aware of integration knowledge
as well
as necessary self-defense measures when participating in
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FTAs
. The percentage of Vietnamese
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enterprises
which can take advantages from FTA is less than 50%. And Vietnam's exports had been the subject of 208 foreign trade remedy investigation cases by the
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end
of August 2021.

Majority of Vietnamese businesses are
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small
, medium, and even super
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small
(average registered capital of 6 billion VND per
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company
).
However
, their products are
primarily
processed
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goods
that do not
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add
significant economic value.

Moreover
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of
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Origin
under
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contain difficult-to-understand language that
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always be
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explained
by a Ministry of Industry and Trade official (the
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only
entity in Vietnam with
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expertise to interpret it
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Especially
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enterprises
are facing
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challenges from the
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rules
of
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origin
. In
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some
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FTAs
such as
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AFTA
, FTA with China, Korea and Chile, the local content requirements are not stringent (raw materials can
be imported
and
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only
the final stages of cutting and sewing the fabric take place in Vietnam),
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for the
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FTAs
such as ASEAN
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Australia/New Zealand, ASEAN
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India, the local content requirements are much more stringent (final products
are required
to have a minimum
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localisation
rate of around 35–40%).
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IELTS essay Arising problems when Vietnam obeys rules of origin

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5 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
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