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You were on a flight 302 to tokyo when you lost an item of luggage

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I am writing you, to inquire about an item which was left on fligh 302 to Tokyo. shopping bags was missing. It was a black suitcase, which was scrached at the bottom. There were my stories, which I have been writing. And my lively red floral dress. It is very expensive, which is made in Turkey. I wanted to wear it on my party. Finally, the next item was my antique watch, which is very expensive. It was made in Italy, which belongs to the 19 th century. It is strap was dark brown with silver pinstripes, which was made of leather. In the event of the bag being found, I can be contacted on 976273829 from morning till night every day.
I am writing you, to inquire about an item which was
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left
on
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fligh
302 to Tokyo.

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shopping
bags was missing.

It was a black suitcase, which was
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scrached
at the bottom. There were my stories, which I have been writing. And my lively red floral dress. It is
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very
expensive, which
is made
in Turkey. I wanted to wear it on my party.
Finally
, the
next
item was my antique
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watch
, which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
expensive. It
was made
in Italy, which belongs to the
Did you mean "19th"?
19 th
century. It is strap was dark brown with silver pinstripes, which
was made
of leather.

In the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
of the bag
being found
, I can
be contacted
on 976273829 from morning till night every day.

IELTS essay You were on a flight 302 to tokyo when you lost an item of luggage

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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