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You think parental aspirations have advantages and disadvantages

You think parental aspirations have advantages and disadvantages 0M3aq

Introduction I can say, now parents want their children to work and live well, and not wasting their time will help them not to waste time and find their respect in life. . Many of them achieve high results in their field, but some are not satisfied with their work, do not give their love to their work and do not succeed. I want to cover this topic today. Main body 1 One evident benefit to go to the parental aspirations, this is parental consent. Parents never offer their children anything bad and do not want them to live a poor life. They have been researching this profession for years and they are talking about the drawbacks we may face in this profession. If the child chooses a parent's profession, it will provide more opportunities. Not repeating the mistakes they made, not having enough experience and master class and so on. Main body 2 On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to go to the parental aspirations, it is the child's dissatisfaction with the parents. For the reason that, they do not work in a profession they want and imagine. They don’t even try to run it when they don’t want to. In some cases, they may even feel unhappy. Conclusion In conclusion, while there are plus points to choose parental professions, too much would be as a result.

Introduction

I can say, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 parents You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 their children to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 well, and not wasting their time will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them not to waste time and find their respect in life. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 of them achieve high results in their field, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 are not satisfied with their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
, do not give their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and do not succeed. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 to cover this topic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Main body 1

One evident benefit to go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 aspirations, this is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 consent. Parents never offer their children anything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 and do not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a poor life. They have been researching this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
 for Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).years, and
years and
 they are talking about the drawbacks we may face in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
. If the child chooses a parent's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
, it will provide more opportunities. Not repeating the mistakes they made, not having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 experience and master This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on.

Main body 2

On the other hand
, there are obvious disadvantages to go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
 aspirations, it is the child's dissatisfaction with the parents. For the reason that, they do not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
 they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 and imagine. They don’t even try to run it when they don’t You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 to. In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases, they may even feel unhappy.

Conclusion

In conclusion
, while there are plus points to choose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherlymaternalpaternal
parental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
professions
, too much would be as a result
. 