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You should use your own ideas knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

You should use your own ideas knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence 3xOjn
Nowadays technology and machinery be popular. Today a lot of people surfing the internet for working which is distance of home and this situation is increasing. In this essay, I will the arguments for and againts this progress. For example telephone which save time. On the grounds that going to work take a long time. On the computer there will be time for other interesting activities. And again these would mean that you must spend for the procces. As we need to protect our eyes from the rays of smartphones and computers of course there are pros as good as cons. This can have detrimental effect. Have advantages to work from home their time is saved. Beside their work easier and less money is spent. All of these were advantages of working from home. There are many disadvantages of working from home. For example more people use the internet computers and smartphones for a long time. It is worse their health will be. As peoples to watch the computers a long time, their health is become worse. On the other hand you cann't have a lot of communication with peoples. In my opinion people's performance is also improving technology advances. The person working at home should do as some beneficial actions as possible and harmful actions.
Nowadays technology and machinery be popular.
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Today
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a lot of
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people
surfing the internet for
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working
which is distance of home and this situation is increasing. In this essay, I will the arguments for and
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againts
this progress.
For example
telephone which save
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time
. On the grounds that going to work take a long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. On the computer there will be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for other interesting activities. And again these would mean that you
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must
spend for the
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procces
. As we need to protect our eyes from the rays of smartphones and computers
of course
there are pros as
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good
as cons. This can have detrimental effect. Have advantages to work from home their
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time
is saved
. Beside their work easier and less money
is spent
. All of these were advantages of
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working
from home. There are
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many
disadvantages of
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working
from home.
For example
more
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people
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use
the internet computers and smartphones for a long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. It is worse their health will be. As
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peoples
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
the computers a long
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time
, their health
is become
worse.
On the other hand
you
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cann
't have
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a lot of
communication with
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peoples
. In my opinion
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people
's performance is
also
improving technology advances. The person
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working
at home should do as
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some
beneficial actions as possible and harmful actions.
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IELTS essay You should use your own ideas knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
216 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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