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"You should always paddle your own canoe"

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Independency is one of the most important traits that a person could have, but not everyone wants to be independent and tend to be more dependent on others. You should always take responsibility of your own actions and decisions and remember to not to be a victim of your own consequences. Some people think that it might be easier to let other people paddle your own canoe, but that’s not always the case.
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is one of the most
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traits that a person could have,
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not everyone wants to be independent and tend to be more dependent on others. You should always take responsibility of your
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own
actions and decisions and remember
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to not to
be a victim of your
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own
consequences.
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people
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think
that it might be easier to
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let
other
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paddle your
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that’s not always the case.
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IELTS essay "You should always paddle your own canoe"

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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