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Music is the best form of art. Do you agree with this statement? Support your ideas with examples.

Music is the best form of art. Support your ideas with examples. Pk3YE
In every corner of this world civilizations have considered art as an alternative for language. We have been communicating through art in several ways one of which being music. Some may argue that the supreme form of art is music. From where I am standing, I would put music on the top of my list of art expression. In this essay I will elaborate on my reasons. To begin with, anyone could listen to any kind of music and relate to it in some ways. Indeed, music is a universal language that connects people from all around the world culminating in a considerable merger of people from various societies listening to a piece of music and having their unique thoughts of it. For instance, south Korean pop music have become renowned in the past two decades escalating to be heard by people from all of the countries with an internet connection. Secondly, you can make music with blowing in an empty glass. Despite what the general public believes, you do not need expensive tools to make music. To illustrate, the accessibility of music instruments makes it easier for people to express their musical talent in tunes unique to them. To illustrate, there have been several videos of people playing tunes with odd instruments that have went viral and become a trend followed by millions. More interestingly, countless kinds of musical instruments native to a certain region can be find. Making it possible to compose tunes by colossal instrumental options. At last, an artis will have more freedom to express themself through music. In comparison withs other forms of art, musicians are not necessarily asked to explain the backstory of their piece. Therefore, their piece is experimental and anyone could have a take on it without them having to dive deep in their composing process. Additionally, they can bring out the listeners feelings in both a paralinguistic or a linguistic way. Briefly, they can evoke sentiments even without saying a single word. To conclude, music can be considered as the prominent form of art as it has superiority for any aspect of it. As it was discussed above, it can be understood by anyone, played by anything and composed freely.
In every corner of this world civilizations have considered
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art
as an alternative for language. We have been communicating through
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in several ways one of which being
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music
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that the supreme form of
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is
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music
. From where I am standing, I would put
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music
on the top of my list of
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art
expression. In this essay I will elaborate on my reasons.

To
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begin
with, anyone could listen to any kind of
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music
and relate to it in
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some
ways.
Indeed
,
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music
is a universal language that connects
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people
from all around the world culminating in a considerable merger of
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people
from various societies listening to a piece of
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music
and having their unique thoughts of it.
For instance
,
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south Korean
pop
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music
have become renowned in the past two decades escalating to
be heard
by
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people
from
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all of the
countries with an internet connection.

Secondly
, you can
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make
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music
with blowing in an empty glass. Despite what the
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general public
believes, you do not need expensive tools to
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make
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music
. To illustrate, the accessibility of
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music
instruments
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makes
it easier for
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people
to express their musical talent in tunes unique to them. To illustrate, there have been several videos of
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people
playing tunes with odd instruments that have
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went
viral and become a trend followed by millions. More
interestingly
, countless kinds of musical instruments native to a certain region can be
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. Making it possible to compose tunes by colossal instrumental options.

At last, an
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artis
will have more freedom to express
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themself
through
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music
. In
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comparison
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withs
other forms of
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art
, musicians are not
necessarily
asked to
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explain
the backstory of their piece.
Therefore
, their piece is experimental and anyone could have a take on it without them having to dive deep in their composing process.
Additionally
, they can bring out the listeners feelings in both a
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paralinguistic
or a linguistic way.
Briefly
, they can evoke sentiments even without saying a single word.

To conclude
,
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music
can
be considered
as the prominent form of
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as it has superiority for any aspect of it. As it
was discussed
above, it can
be understood
by anyone, played by anything and composed
freely
.
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IELTS essay Music is the best form of art. Support your ideas with examples.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
369 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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