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write at least 150 words about vacation or trip you like

write at least 150 words about vacation or trip you like J3NEk
In summer vacation 2018 my family went to Halong beach. I think it was the best vacation of my life. My vacation was 2days and 1 night, which was too short. On day 1, I went to the Halong airport on December 2. After that, I took a taxi and went to the hotel. The hotel was very good, the service taking care of customers was the best. My room was very convenient with windows and a bed was comfortable. When I received the room at 15: 00 and we went to the beach. I was very lucky because for the 2 days I lived in Halong the weather was wonderful. That night I went to the restaurant to eat seafood. The seafood in Halong was very delicious. On day 2, I took a rental car to explore the scenic area there. The scenic area in Halong was sublimity. In addition, the people there were friendly. My vacation in Halong was very good but the time was too short. If you want a place to relax and explore, I think Halong beach is the best choice for you. Next time, I will go there one more time.
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2018 my family
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beach. I
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it was the best
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of my life. My
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was 2days and 1 night, which was too short. On day 1, I
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airport on December 2. After that, I took a taxi and
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to the hotel. The hotel was
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, the service taking care of customers was the best. My room was
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convenient with windows and a bed was comfortable. When I received the room at 15:
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lucky
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for the 2 days I
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the weather was wonderful. That night I
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to the restaurant to eat seafood. The seafood in
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was
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delicious. On day 2, I took a rental car to explore the scenic area there. The scenic area in
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was sublimity.
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there were friendly. My
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was
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the time was too short. If you want a place to relax and explore, I
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beach is the best choice for you.
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time, I will go there one more time.
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IELTS essay write at least 150 words about vacation or trip you like

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