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You see this announcement on an English-language website: Articles wanted Which animals make the best pets? Tell us which animals you think make the best pets and why. Write your article in 140 – 190 words in an appropriate style.

You see this announcement on an English-language website: Articles wanted Which animals make the best pets? Tell us which animals you think make the best pets and why. Write your article in 140 – 190 words in an appropriate style. Dqw0p

Having someone with you who gives you the feeling that you are not alone is rare. This can’t be found in humans now a days. But pets are still love. Pets are closer to us then humans. And in all the pets, cats are the cutest ones. The reason why I am saying that cats are best pets, is both my personal affection towards them and their good manners. Like, they are more easily maintained. They do not need a lot of attention like having a walk every day still they love you so much. Cats can go with your mood swings. They can be a relief from stress. As they have the softest fur. So even if your mood is bad. Only taping your cat’s head will relieve a lot of stress and tension. They also keep themselves clean. They can bathe themselves. Not just they keep themselves clean. Cats do keep your house free from mice. Everyone has their own preference about what they like best as pet. Personally, I prefer cats because of their lovely nature and distinguishable characteristics.

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now a days
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But
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pets
 are still
Consider using a past participle here: "loved".loved
love
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Pets
 are closer to us then humans. And in all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtreasuredoglover
pets
, cats are the cutest ones. The reason why I am saying that cats are best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtreasuredoglover
pets
, is both my personal affection towards them and their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 manners. Like, they are more easily
 maintained. They do not need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 attention like having a walk every day still
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much. Cats can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 your mood swings. They can be a relief from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 they have the softest fur. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 even if your mood is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 taping your cat’s head will relieve This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and tension. They also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 themselves clean. They can bathe themselves. Not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 themselves clean. Cats do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 free from mice. Everyone has their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 preference about what they like best as pet. Personally
, I prefer cats This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their lovely nature and distinguishable characteristics. 