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You see this announcement on an English-language website: Articles wanted Which animals make the best pets? Tell us which animals you think make the best pets and why. Write your article in 140 – 190 words in an appropriate style.

You see this announcement on an English-language website: Articles wanted Which animals make the best pets? Tell us which animals you think make the best pets and why. Write your article in 140 – 190 words in an appropriate style. Dqw0p
Having someone with you who gives you the feeling that you are not alone is rare. This can’t be found in humans now a days. But pets are still love. Pets are closer to us then humans. And in all the pets, cats are the cutest ones. The reason why I am saying that cats are best pets, is both my personal affection towards them and their good manners. Like, they are more easily maintained. They do not need a lot of attention like having a walk every day still they love you so much. Cats can go with your mood swings. They can be a relief from stress. As they have the softest fur. So even if your mood is bad. Only taping your cat’s head will relieve a lot of stress and tension. They also keep themselves clean. They can bathe themselves. Not just they keep themselves clean. Cats do keep your house free from mice. Everyone has their own preference about what they like best as pet. Personally, I prefer cats because of their lovely nature and distinguishable characteristics.
Having someone with you who gives you the feeling that you are not alone is rare. This can’t
be found
in humans
Did you mean "nowadays"?
now a days
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pets
are
still
Consider using a past participle here: "loved".
love
.
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Pets
are closer to us then humans. And in all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pets
, cats are the cutest ones. The reason why I am saying that cats are best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pets
, is both my personal affection towards them and their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
manners. Like, they are more
easily
maintained. They do not need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
attention like having a walk every day
still
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
you
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so
much. Cats can
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go with
your mood swings. They can be a relief from
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stress
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
they have the softest fur.
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So
even if your mood is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Only
taping your cat’s head will relieve
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a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
and tension. They
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
themselves clean. They can bathe themselves. Not
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just
they
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keep
themselves clean. Cats do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
free from mice. Everyone has their
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own
preference about what they like best as pet.
Personally
, I prefer cats
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because
of their lovely nature and distinguishable characteristics.
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IELTS essay You see this announcement on an English-language website: Articles wanted Which animals make the best pets? Tell us which animals you think make the best pets and why. Write your article in 140 – 190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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