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Most of the students have great chances to study abroad. This has a lot of positive aspect. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of the students have great chances to study abroad. This has a lot of positive aspect. OwRej
It is inevitable that a great deal of opportunities are being on students who desire taking education in foreign countries. Personally i figure that there are much positive dimensions of such kind of convenients. In this essay unusual vivid thoughts are elaborated with trustworthy facts. To commence with, different fine chances are highly useful for learners that want to devellop their knowledge. To be more precise, chances, convenints can assist to expand competence and also outlook. In addition to this, students are capable of exchanging their thoughts and ideas. On the other hand, although there are a lot of good aspects of studing in adopted country, some people distract that students have modern education, however, they forget their tradition and traditional culture. Result of this is extremelly miserable. To conclude, studing abroad is limitless opportunity to every person who aspire to utilize every chances.
It is inevitable that a great deal of opportunities
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are
being on students who desire taking education in foreign countries.
Personally
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i
figure that there are much
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positive
dimensions of such kind of
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convenients
. In this essay unusual vivid thoughts
are elaborated
with trustworthy facts. To commence with,
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different
fine chances are
highly
useful for learners that want to
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devellop
their knowledge. To be more precise, chances,
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convenints
can assist to expand competence and
also
outlook.
In addition
to this, students are capable of exchanging their thoughts and
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ideas
.
On the other hand
, although there are
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a lot of
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good
aspects of
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studing
in adopted country,
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some
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people
distract that students have modern education,
however
, they forget their tradition and traditional culture. Result of this is
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extremelly
miserable.
To conclude
,
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studing
abroad is limitless opportunity to every person who aspire to utilize every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "chance"?
chances
.
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IELTS essay Most of the students have great chances to study abroad. This has a lot of positive aspect.

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