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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.

Hy everyone! Today i have experienced a singing concert, where a number of renowned singers were present to show their skills. It is usual for me to visit such events. I have enjoyed various songs from well known singers. On that day where I attended the event I found one singer most expert in its singing approach. He not only kept a balance of voice tone as per the poetry requirements but also showed realistic emotions in coherence with the lyrics of the song. Although their participents also delivered best of themselves, but about the singer i have mentioned earlier who inspired me this time have presented expertise exceptional from his other companions. Such talented people have always an impression o their fans which lasts on long term bases, same experience of mine have made me also one of those fans who become attached to such stars.

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