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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the contemporary day and age, there is a war of words regarding the belief that living abroad where language barrier is a serious obstacle of social and pragmatic also. An equal number of people opines in favour of the vary notion, however others are hesitant to it. The following essay would cast light on my personal perspective along with an apt example. I partially welcome the statement that speaking foreign language causes consequential problem by communally and empirically. Multifarious reason are responsible for my outlook. First and most prominent one, communication is mandatory for everyone when they are living abroad. If people don’t know foreign or international language gould
In the contemporary day and age, there is a war of words regarding the belief that living abroad where language barrier is a serious obstacle of social and pragmatic
also
. An equal number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
opines in
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favour’ is British English.
favour
of
After ‘the’, do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of ‘vary’ is correct. If ‘vary’ is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the vary
notion,
however
others are hesitant to it. The following essay would cast light on my personal perspective along with an apt example. I
partially
welcome the statement that speaking foreign language causes consequential problem by
communally
and
empirically
. Multifarious reason are responsible for my outlook.
First
and most prominent one, communication is mandatory for everyone when they are living abroad. If
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
don’t know foreign or international language
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
gould

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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