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You recently stayed at your friend s place to look after the house while he she is away You accidentally damaged something in his her house Write a letter to your friend and say What was the accident When did it happen Suggest how the damage can be fixed v.1

You recently stayed at your friend s place to look after the house while he she is away You accidentally damaged something in his her house Write a letter to your friend and say What was the accident When did it happen Suggest how the damage can be fixed v. 1
Nowadays, people have different views on effective ways to share important information. Sharing data in scientific analysis, industry, and the academic sphere are considered to be beneficial. However, on the other hand, it is also believed that some knowledge is confident that it cannot be shared freely in a public forum. In my opinion, sharing information has both advantages and its drawbacks. Hence, this essay will discuss both viewpoints. In the field of researcher, businessman, and academia, most of the people work upon creating something new in their respective fields. The invention that related to such fields has been always confidential in nature and generally it is advisable not to share it on any public forum. There have been several cases of people quarrelling over the ownership of research journals or other inventions shared on public platforms. On the other hand, sharing material about any commodity on a public conference can result in the production of a better its commodity and this will not have been possible if they had kept the clue secret. Most of the multi-national companies such as Apple, Google, and Microsoft and so on. Launch a beta version or lab tested version of their production to see the reactions of the general public. On the basis of their reactions, the companies decide whether to proceed or to drop the idea for the production of that product. It is beneficial for companies to use trial-error methods of their invention. To conclude, most people in the world know every rose has its thorn, this correlated to sharing confidential information publicly has its own pros and cons. In my opinion, it is extremely necessary for people in the world to share their knowledge regarding science and business, but it is equally crucial to assure the information that is sensitive to general public, companies and also the countries
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views on effective ways to share
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important
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information
.
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data in scientific analysis, industry, and the academic sphere
are considered
to be beneficial.
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on the other hand
, it is
also
believed that
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some
knowledge is confident that it cannot
be shared
freely
in a
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public
forum. In my opinion,
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sharing
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information
has both advantages and its drawbacks.
Hence
, this essay will discuss both viewpoints.

In the field of researcher, businessman, and academia, most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
work upon creating something new in their respective fields. The invention that related to such fields has been always confidential in nature and
generally
it is advisable not to share it on any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
forum. There have been several cases of
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people
quarrelling over the ownership of research journals or other inventions shared on
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public
platforms.

On the other hand
,
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sharing
material about any commodity on a
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public
conference can result in the production of a better its commodity and this will not have been possible if they had
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kept
the clue secret. Most of the multi-national
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companies
such as Apple, Google, and Microsoft and
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so
on. Launch a beta version or lab
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tested
version of their production to
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see
the reactions of the general
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public
. On the basis of their reactions, the
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companies
decide whether to proceed or to drop the
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idea
for the production of that product. It is beneficial for
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companies
to
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use
trial-error methods of their invention.

To conclude
, most
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people
in the world know every rose has its thorn, this correlated to
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sharing
confidential
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information
publicly
has its
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own
pros and cons. In my opinion, it is
extremely
necessary for
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people
in the world to share their knowledge regarding science and business,
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but
it is
equally
crucial to assure the
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information
that is
sensitive to general
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public
,
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companies
and
also
the
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countries
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IELTS essay You recently stayed at your friend s place to look after the house while he she is away You accidentally damaged something in his her house Write a letter to your friend and say What was the accident When did it happen Suggest how the damage can be fixed v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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