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You must wash your hands

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1. You must wash your hands 1) cleaning hands helps you avoid virus and bacteria 2. Antibiotics can help treat diarrhea 1 ) Antibiotics or anti medications might help treat diarrhea caused by bacteria. 2) Antibiotics are Used by 3- to 7-day. 3. drinking a lot of fluids it can help us recover 1) Drinking lots of fluids is helpful in flushing out the bacteria. 2) It includes water, broths and juices. Avoid caffeine and alcohol.
1. You
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must
wash your
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hands


1) cleaning hands
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helps
you avoid virus and bacteria

2. Antibiotics can
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help
treat
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diarrhea


1
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)
Antibiotics or anti medications might
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help
treat diarrhea caused by bacteria.

2) Antibiotics are
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Used
by 3- to 7-day.

3. drinking
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a lot of
fluids it can
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help
us
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recover


1) Drinking lots of fluids is helpful in flushing out the bacteria.

2) It includes water, broths and juices. Avoid caffeine and alcohol.
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IELTS essay You must wash your hands

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
75 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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